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Nick Hills's avatar

"I became the catalyst for whatever was happening to you. The consent to fill that role slipped through my fingers, and left stains on my life I’m still trying to wash out." Wow! Great line and great piece, Jesse!

Jesse Davis's avatar

Thanks Nick! That one felt good when it slipped out. You know - when all the words line up right the first time šŸ˜…

Suzanne as Pilgrimdoodles's avatar

You can't leave it there Jesse ā˜ŗļø.

Jesse Davis's avatar

Yay! That's an incredible compliment for flash fiction.

Thanks Suzanne šŸ«¶šŸ»